Behind the lush greenery was the ancient building.The fading yellow tiles on its rooftop represented the rain and shine it had been through for the four-hundred years. The carvings of the building were so delicate, showcasing the excellent craftsmanship. The mountain stood behind the building like a bodyguard, guarding it from the dangers of the outside world. It was no wonder why the emperors chose to be buried here.
there is a saying that people dont make traps, guards unless there is something worth protecting. So i feel that the story will be really exciting as there will be many dangerous encounters the story will have.
ReplyDeleteI think that your story would be about the ancient building actually being a massive cake preserved throughout the centuries, and that once someone entered, he/she would be immediately killed by the roof which would collapse on him/her. The main character managed to bypass that and many other traps to arrive at the 'real' ancient building, only to find an emperor that is long supposed to be dead waiting for him.
ReplyDeleteI think this story would be some sort of ghost story. The dead emperor might wake up from from his long sleep.
ReplyDeleteI think you are going to unravel a mystery! I think you are the explorer and you discovered the tomb of the emperor which has been lost for centuries! :)
ReplyDeleteI feel that shaodian's comment is the closest to what would happen in my story. The story would be an adventurous one, with the protagonist would face many traps and finally overcome them and discovered the mystery of the ancient tomb, which is the fact that the emperor was still alive even after 400 years.
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